Edgar, Jimmy and others in “Fix Me, Dummy”

I really like the adjustments.

Well, your asinine notes started a thought process of actual, usable fixes. I had to cut the scene in the cockpit of the plane where Joachim Kirschner masturbates during his bombing run on London, but the section is still highly erotic.

Did you take out the thing with Roger spanking his nephew?

What, you let Dorothy read it?!

I thought the sample chapters were great...

Thank you. It's so nice to hear from fans.

...just potentially very alienating to women.

This is literature, okay? It shall sing its own song, uncaring if sensibilities are too delicate. Anyway, it feels like we keep forgetting the proposal's in already. It's done.

Okay. Just so many descriptions of semen on stockings.

Stockings are a sign both of the deprivation of the Second World War and how much the repressed Kitty's slutty little legs wanted semen on them! What is alienating about that?