Naomi Wildman, Seven of Nine and others in “Unfinished Business”

How does this sound: "The Weird Planet Where Time Moved Very Fast and So Did The People Who Lived There." By Naomi Wildman. That's what I'm calling my report for Astronomy class. Neelix said I should choose a planet to write about. So I picked this one.

Seven of Nine

Your title is verbose. I suggest you try to condense it.

... "The Weird Planet."

Seven of Nine

Better, but it lacks precision. "The Weird Planet Displaced in Time."

Perfect.